"The Biden Admin.Disaster: We can see the obese results of this green food revolution waddling down the aisles of supermarkets and ordering green smoothies and muffins in the food courts.
Green energy will prove a disaster for our economy, and green foods will be a deadly choice for many humans.
for me summery is the limit of my available concentration ... too much info to process in detail... i believe i can extrapolate detail from summery and wise cliches
for me a true valid cliche ... do your best and leave the rest to the good God... aligory... a farmer prepairs the land for sowing ,sows good seed waters, fertilizer,weeds etc ... but cannot know how it will grow ... cannot know the weather,,, cannot know if disease comes, cannot know the yeald etc... and finally and firstly i ask our heavenly Father for guidance ... dont worry be happy ,good luck ... happy trails
I don't see that there's anything else needed to be stated on your part. The fact that you've gone to the length of explaining your intention for your article - that it needs to be read with care and utmost attention - that's all I need to know in order to try to do it justice in reading it.
I'm not qualified to offer ideas about procedures (for lack of a better word) used when writing, but sentience has always factored in to how I receive anything I read.
I was recently reminded of Mark Twain's statement: "The difference between the almost right word and the right word is really a large matter—it's the difference between the lightning bug and the lightning." So the only advice I can offer is, whatever method you choose for presentation, be the lightning!
Can't really add anything of great value, but being as correct and well researched as best you can is a good way to ensure it's spread beyonf Sunstack.
it's simple, Prof Ray- go with Your gut feelings & of course, the advice/admonishments of SheWhoMustBeObeyed...Your Calling sure as hhell isn't that of a fast food joint with picky demands of this/not that...Can You picture audience participation in a performance of a Beethoven Symphony or a Miles Davis gig? As any motor sports guy will tell you, the harder you try to go faster, the lap times get longer.
Ray, this may be just me, but, even though I love Substack and hope it can persist with some integrity for as long as possible, I do find it difficult to read a post for super-comprehension when it is interrupted by a bunch of links, even when those links are essential.
It's just that the interruption in the flow is an interruption in the flow, and disturbs my wee concentration.
And if you are providing maybe two levels of interruption in the form of both footnotes and links, I foresee a slog and possibly a headache. Because I am very interested in the subject, I would probably get through it, BUT I wonder if there is a way you could also provide such a key work in perhaps a PDF document that is formatted in a more conventional and readable way, for instance, footnotes appearing conveniently at the bottom of the relevant page, and I don't really know how you would present all the linked material. . . . In other words, when I come upon something that I'm definitely wanting to sit down and read with concentration, I want to print it out and read it in a way that I could even annotate it. (Not on my phone or computer.) I don't know if that is possible to do in Substack. Maybe you could refer to a PDF or other comfortably readable format being available on a separate platform, like your website, and maybe for a fee! :))
Ray, a great many of your articles are very informative, concise and often the best length to hold focus on the subject you present. If what you are planing publish is long, it can be helpful to summarize first. (Executive Summary) I have found most of your writing very easy to collate and I do consider them on good reflection when I review my own research.
When you find yourself "stalking the truth," it is also important to stalk the "stalker." We are both the Observer and the Observed.
People usually can maintain interest in something if it can be kept straight forward. Yet it is possible to say a lot with very few words, especially if the subject is relevant. You already have a great style of presentation. I hope what I said here helps.
Simply asking for help is a good start:) It makes the reader part of the transaction. Most marketing schemes are just too overtly transparently fear mongering or wowish in a rumor mongering way. Feeling particularly impotent today, even though it’s pretty calm in the gallery today as I do the end of March accounting and commission figuring. You’ve wetted my appetite with your post :)
We are all paralysed. The world has stopped. None of our old systems work any more. We are waiting for the re-boot. We will pay attention to something that grabs us and drags us into that re-boot. Is what you have to say big enough and novel enough to do that?
I can only offer mundane suggestions. I am not very creative and marketing is not my strong suit.
Clickbait headlines and sensationalist approaches are disdainful IMO. If the information is solid, it will speak for itself and your personal integrity. For those with eyes to see and ears to hear... smth like that.
I would recommend using a powerful, attractive and relevant image to lead the article and posting on Gab.com
When Dr S Gundry’s book about lectins in food was written about 7 yrs ago he chose to entitle the first chapter thus:” It’s Not Your Fault”
Re-the poisonous aspects of some foods
It was catchy not only for its brevity and simplicity but for its appeal to so many who had been medically gaslighted(lit?) for so long.
Thats my thought FWIW.. an article sets itself apart when it sets the reader’s mind up by being so authentically supportive of the reader’s problem. That battle in their mind struggling to be settled.
The asking of your readers in this article, for help, is attractive in a similar way.
Both appeal to my sense of 1) author says i was lied to, and agrees with my disposition and 2) im made to feel there is value in my opinion.
You know all this as a fine writer. I’ve caught myself thinking at the keyboard again...
"The Biden Admin.Disaster: We can see the obese results of this green food revolution waddling down the aisles of supermarkets and ordering green smoothies and muffins in the food courts.
Green energy will prove a disaster for our economy, and green foods will be a deadly choice for many humans.
Future footpaths will be crowded with mobility scooters and hospitals and care homes will be overwhelmed by unhealthy aging vegans. " https://climatechangedispatch.com/how-greens-are-creating-a-man-made-food-and-health-disaster/
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JUST IN: John Kennedy Does Not Hold Back Questioning DHS Sec. Alejandro Mayorkas
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yaun https://www.breitbart.com/economy/2023/04/02/carney-fox-friends-chinas-yuan-inevitable-serious-threat-dollar-worlds-currency/
GATES' FAKE MEAT CRAP BANNED IN ITALY
Italy Bans Bill Gates' Fake Meat Products Due To 'Serious Health Concerns' - News Punch
https://newspunch.com/italy-bans-bill-gates-fake-meat-products-due-to-serious-health-concerns/
Recession Odds Jump as the Fed Crushes Consumers
https://www.theepochtimes.com/recession-odds-jump-as-the-fed-crushes-consumers_5166262.html?utm_source=Morningbrief&src_src=Morningbrief&utm_campaign=mb-2023-04-03&src_cmp=mb-2023-04-03&utm_medium=email&est=vtImaOixZ7DKMa0nXWg3QZIaNX9ohqFYTJlpZGB%2FXLgIoDEQ2o6cay%2B5LB8%3D
China, Russia Leading Push to Replace US Dollar as World’s Reserve Currency
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BREAKING: Inflation Nightmare Intensifies As Saudi Arabia Announces Surprise Cuts In Oil Output
https://trendingpoliticsnews.com/breaking-saudi-arabia-announces-surprise-oil-production-cuts-paub/?utm_source=trendingpolitics&utm_medium=klaviyo&_kx=BUd-fF0qqO5t5QQq33S_mZE9J8ndIrMUyntNt1dUzFY%3D.XhZFkN
for me summery is the limit of my available concentration ... too much info to process in detail... i believe i can extrapolate detail from summery and wise cliches
for me a true valid cliche ... do your best and leave the rest to the good God... aligory... a farmer prepairs the land for sowing ,sows good seed waters, fertilizer,weeds etc ... but cannot know how it will grow ... cannot know the weather,,, cannot know if disease comes, cannot know the yeald etc... and finally and firstly i ask our heavenly Father for guidance ... dont worry be happy ,good luck ... happy trails
I don't see that there's anything else needed to be stated on your part. The fact that you've gone to the length of explaining your intention for your article - that it needs to be read with care and utmost attention - that's all I need to know in order to try to do it justice in reading it.
I'm not qualified to offer ideas about procedures (for lack of a better word) used when writing, but sentience has always factored in to how I receive anything I read.
I was recently reminded of Mark Twain's statement: "The difference between the almost right word and the right word is really a large matter—it's the difference between the lightning bug and the lightning." So the only advice I can offer is, whatever method you choose for presentation, be the lightning!
Can't really add anything of great value, but being as correct and well researched as best you can is a good way to ensure it's spread beyonf Sunstack.
Post it in Chapters.
*Chapters* has a less casual connotation.
it's simple, Prof Ray- go with Your gut feelings & of course, the advice/admonishments of SheWhoMustBeObeyed...Your Calling sure as hhell isn't that of a fast food joint with picky demands of this/not that...Can You picture audience participation in a performance of a Beethoven Symphony or a Miles Davis gig? As any motor sports guy will tell you, the harder you try to go faster, the lap times get longer.
Ray, this may be just me, but, even though I love Substack and hope it can persist with some integrity for as long as possible, I do find it difficult to read a post for super-comprehension when it is interrupted by a bunch of links, even when those links are essential.
It's just that the interruption in the flow is an interruption in the flow, and disturbs my wee concentration.
And if you are providing maybe two levels of interruption in the form of both footnotes and links, I foresee a slog and possibly a headache. Because I am very interested in the subject, I would probably get through it, BUT I wonder if there is a way you could also provide such a key work in perhaps a PDF document that is formatted in a more conventional and readable way, for instance, footnotes appearing conveniently at the bottom of the relevant page, and I don't really know how you would present all the linked material. . . . In other words, when I come upon something that I'm definitely wanting to sit down and read with concentration, I want to print it out and read it in a way that I could even annotate it. (Not on my phone or computer.) I don't know if that is possible to do in Substack. Maybe you could refer to a PDF or other comfortably readable format being available on a separate platform, like your website, and maybe for a fee! :))
Ray, I don't know what I could say that hasn't been said, but I assure you, brother, I will take it seriously.
Edwin
Ray, a great many of your articles are very informative, concise and often the best length to hold focus on the subject you present. If what you are planing publish is long, it can be helpful to summarize first. (Executive Summary) I have found most of your writing very easy to collate and I do consider them on good reflection when I review my own research.
When you find yourself "stalking the truth," it is also important to stalk the "stalker." We are both the Observer and the Observed.
People usually can maintain interest in something if it can be kept straight forward. Yet it is possible to say a lot with very few words, especially if the subject is relevant. You already have a great style of presentation. I hope what I said here helps.
Simply asking for help is a good start:) It makes the reader part of the transaction. Most marketing schemes are just too overtly transparently fear mongering or wowish in a rumor mongering way. Feeling particularly impotent today, even though it’s pretty calm in the gallery today as I do the end of March accounting and commission figuring. You’ve wetted my appetite with your post :)
We are all paralysed. The world has stopped. None of our old systems work any more. We are waiting for the re-boot. We will pay attention to something that grabs us and drags us into that re-boot. Is what you have to say big enough and novel enough to do that?
Thanks Ray. The distillation of your life isn't any coffee break read. Polite suggestion only.
There a too many post on ss that are far too long & long winded.
Breaking your story into short chapters may help keep readers attention & concentration better.
I can only offer mundane suggestions. I am not very creative and marketing is not my strong suit.
Clickbait headlines and sensationalist approaches are disdainful IMO. If the information is solid, it will speak for itself and your personal integrity. For those with eyes to see and ears to hear... smth like that.
I would recommend using a powerful, attractive and relevant image to lead the article and posting on Gab.com
When Dr S Gundry’s book about lectins in food was written about 7 yrs ago he chose to entitle the first chapter thus:” It’s Not Your Fault”
Re-the poisonous aspects of some foods
It was catchy not only for its brevity and simplicity but for its appeal to so many who had been medically gaslighted(lit?) for so long.
Thats my thought FWIW.. an article sets itself apart when it sets the reader’s mind up by being so authentically supportive of the reader’s problem. That battle in their mind struggling to be settled.
The asking of your readers in this article, for help, is attractive in a similar way.
Both appeal to my sense of 1) author says i was lied to, and agrees with my disposition and 2) im made to feel there is value in my opinion.
You know all this as a fine writer. I’ve caught myself thinking at the keyboard again...